Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 30 April 2020
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He moves kinda fast. He is always ready to fight crime and he normally wins., over evil. When he turns into Batman, he wears a black cape and he has a mask which fully covers his face. He could seem scary if you didn't know he was a good guy.
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Well done Isaac. I love this description. You have used some excellent words in this piece of writing like 'deceiving'. I think that your last sentence is powerful and very true.
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Miss P
Hi Isaac what great descriptive language you have used. He is a very interesting character being a good person but wearing a disguise when he turns into Batman. Why do you think he does this?
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