Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Isaac I am Fletcher from New Brighton Catholic School. Your I think you need to work on your WALTS and add some writing. I like your DLO cause it looks really creative and you put a lot of time into it. BAIIIIII :3
ReplyDeleteHello Isaac I am a student from Hay Park School and my name is Ehmarze. Add some more information into it. Can you make a little bit more creative pictures? Or maybe more writing?
ReplyDeleteHello Isaac.
ReplyDeleteYou'r Kiwi Is Awesome.
I think you'r kiwi shines out like a star
But Maybe Next time do the W.A.L.T Proper??
Whats the positive not u Fletcher Ehmarze
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