Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 6 August 2020
All Kids should own pets
Paragraph 1 Firstly they are loving.I own a dog that shows me lots of love. He gets excited when i come home. This makes me feel loved and appreciated.
Paragraph 2 Secondly, They live long. My dog is 4 years old. That's as long as I have been alive . I have had my dong nearly all life
Thirdly, dogs will protect you like police dogs they protect the police from danger.
And that's why all kids should own pets In conclusion,All children should have pets.
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Well done Isaac. It is great to see you starting to use paragraphs. You also have some very strong points such as the fact that they show you love. Ka pai!
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