Thursday 6 August 2020

All Kids should own pets

It is outrageous that people think they should not have. This is because they are loving, they live long and they will protect you.

 Paragraph 1 Firstly they are loving.I own a dog that shows me lots of love. He gets excited when i come home. This makes me feel loved and appreciated.


  Paragraph 2 Secondly, They live long. My dog is 4 years old. That's as long as I have been alive . I have had my dong nearly all life


 Thirdly, dogs will protect you like police dogs they protect the police from danger.

 And that's why all kids should own pets In conclusion,All children should have pets.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Isaac. It is great to see you starting to use paragraphs. You also have some very strong points such as the fact that they show you love. Ka pai!

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