Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 1 May 2020
Cricket writing
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Well done Isaac. It's great to see you writing about what interests you!
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been to watch a game of cricket?
Your writing is very clear and explains the game of cricket beautifully. Well done.
Next time- make sure that your writing doesn't go off the page.
Ka pai
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