Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 14 May 2020
Age 6 months.
Height: 50cm
Best Quality He was a kind Hero.
His flaw He was not scared of anything.
Captain Taylor
Age 40 years old.
Height 5 ft
Best Quality He is nice
His flaw He was to nice
Marama
Age 35
Height: 4 ft
Best Quality: She is beautiful
Her flaw: She fell in love with someone outside of her tribe.
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Hi Isaac, these are good descriptions you have written. The characters sound very interesting. Don't forget to add a WALT or a explanation of what the post is about. Is this a book you have read? What is it called?
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